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Have You Ever Noticed

Have you ever noticed
nothing is what it seems
all our hopes and dreams
flowing in a stream

Up to Heaven all whispered
in God's ear how does
He hear all we have to say
as we kneel each day
to bow our heads and pray

A plan and a purpose are
created with each new life
though our days are often
filled with sorrow and with strife

Wars, famine and disease
are the killers of this world
but fates worse than these
await the wicked souls misdeeds

Count your blessings and hold
fast to those you love
Listen to your teachers
and follow what you are told

For written in the book of life
is each soul who has lived
each and every day for God

and who have strived

to do good works
that uplift their fellow man

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  • raggyann
    October 1, 2007
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    so true are these words

  • BeautifulFlame gold member
    June 28, 2007

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    So Beautiful!

    This is so comforting to the spirit!
    I really loved this !
    Beautiful words penned by a beatiful soul!
    My favorite lines:

    Count your blessings and hold
    fast to those you love
    Listen to your teachers
    and follow what you are told

    ~Lisa~


  • sstar1ster silver member
    June 27, 2007

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    Hi, First I just want to Thank you for your encouraging comments...as I was looking through your poems I found that this one specifically was very touching..almost a reply to 'girl beneath the ghost'..

    'Up to Heaven all whispered
    in God's ear how does
    He hear all we have to say'

    I am reminded that He does hear and understand the pain we go through in life..and I am not as alone as I feel.

    Thanks!

  • LadyUnique silver member
    June 26, 2007

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    this is very soothing your words are upligting and radiate great faith. it's good to read something positive

    . Rewarded 4


  • Miss J
    June 25, 2007

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    That's Tight

    This is soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo deep....this poem diserves a standing ovation!

  • cognitivedistortion
    June 23, 2007

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    I always wondered as kid how he could listen to millions of people at once. But I guess he's supposed to have made all this.
    I liked it, it was pure and innocent.

  • mland5
    June 23, 2007

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    great peice loved it it is wise and insightful i totally agree with this brilliantly poetic and meaningful writing
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