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Work In Progress

i slowly made progress,
moving forward
inch by painful inch,
but now,
going nowhere fast,
i find
all my efforts
have been a waste
life is
as good as over
at 22

I'm not real;;y done with this yet.

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  • CapturedMoon
    June 24, 2007
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    "going nowhere fast,
    i find
    all my efforts
    have been a waste"

    I say "going nowhere fast" all the time so this struck a cord for me. Made it that much more relateable.
    I love this.
    (Love all your work.)
    But this is fantastic and utterly amazing.
    You are a poet without a doubt.