Limbs dripping
with sweetest fruit
In orchard
not my own
Author notes
PROMPT: BELONGING TO HER
In a list
A contest entry
- 10 words, 10 minutes, reserve your place by Lavender Butterfly.
300 points, ended June 23, 2007, 10 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Oh forbidden fruit... How tempting and delicious you are. You captured how sweet it can be to have something that doesn't belong to you in so few words. I haven't read the other poems in this contest but I feel the gold was very deserved.
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I have an orchard if you would like some fruit
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Terrific
Oh my this was amazing. Congrats on the gold.
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Congrats on the gold. Great write. lol
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Congrats hun, well deserved
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Thanks, much!!
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Excellent, congrats~!
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Thanks for the congrats!
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Cool - love this one... x
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wonderful, nothing more succulent that stolen fruit
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