We're sharing razored whispers
&& broken smiles
Making up these excuses
Never seemed so hard
Oh baby you're so confusing
Telling me honest lies
&& I can't quite decide
How to deal with this
Sweetie you're killing me
Telling me it's still the same
I'm not so naive
I know you don't love me
Don't pull me close;;
Or convince me I'm wrong
I see right through the lies
This is quite unfair
Oh please just give me a chance
To tell you from the core
That I'd like nothing more
To believe every word
This won't ever work out right
I can't stand to see you smile
When I know it's so fake
We both know it's not the same
Darling don't get me wrong
I need you so much
You're like my nicotine fix
Keeping me from the edge
Now stop pretending
I know the truth
You don't love me anymore
Even if I do.
There's no point in trying
.Just.give.it.up.
Author notes
[x]Love. Lost love, broken love, you love each other but you don’t
>>>>> ZombiNa <<<<<
Eeeek!
I'm kinda in love with someone
Who says they like me
But I highly doubt it
&& I know he's lying.
A contest entry
- [Baby Tug The String On My Back, Maybe I'll Breathe A Little Longer.] by SarahEatsAirplane.
343 points, ended August 21, 2007, 57 entries
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How could he not like you??
You're amazing!
Great poem though!!
Love it.
Hope you win, so good luck!
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Thanks hun
I don't think
I'm all to amazing
but thanks.
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Stop lying, you know you are.
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Aww. this is so sweet, but it makes me sad. I am sure that if this person doesn't love you, you will be able to find so many more better people, because you are an ahhhmazing person and you deserve the best.
And lovely poem by the way.
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Awuhhh!
Thankies soooo much!
>.<
That makes me kinda happier.
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Its all so true, it makes so much sense, and because of this i think i see now whats going on in my own relationship. thank you this was so amazing.
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Thank you sweetie
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