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A Tower Star and Storm Clouds

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                       Original artwork by Renelle Sommerville



The tower looms away far off,

An awe inspiring sight.

And blinks from high atop its peak

To warn the planes in flight.

But here as ev’ning wends its way

T’ward darkness of the night,

By slowly fading into haze

That disappears from sight,

I can but sit and watch the sun

Sink slowly in the west.

The colours of the just-past storm

Are beauty, manifest.

The orange and yellows blend with blacks

And subtle tones of grays,

Painted ‘cross my peach-hued sky,

By day star’s fading rays.

O touch me colours of the eve,

Intoxicate my soul.

Inspire me with your amber tones,

Your never ending role.

As muted evening shadows spread,

Trees stand in stark relief.

Cloud shapes changing as I watch,

Their time here cruelly brief.

But far away the blinking light

Reminds me once again,

Tomorrow dawns e’er without fail,

And naught is as it’s been.

So shine on never failing light,

As I watch from afar.

Inspired, my fevered mind delights

In this, my special star.

Author notes

This is my tenth collaboration with Reni and I continue to be amazed at her artwork and ability. Each one presents a new challenge and they all spur me to think, both about what I see and what she saw .

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  • Ellis gold member
    November 27, 2007

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    Beautiful

    The word and paint reflect the world
    Of nature in the mind
    Human talent in joy unfurled
    Spread wide to all is kind
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  • Ishtar
    June 28, 2007
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    squeeeeee!


  • XyMaya
    June 28, 2007

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    Breath-taking!!

    I loved this poem!!
    The pictures that my mind see's is amazing!
    What you have created it so beautiful and full of life and insiration!
    I loved the play with the words and the bold way they were placed delighted me in reading this work of art.
    Beautiful and amazing!!


  • Dragon-Tearz13
    June 28, 2007

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    OMG!!

    That poem was beautiful!! and the picture I saw in my own mind almost exactly matched the picture at the top of the page. The artwork is amazing as well. Very Awesome Writing!! I look forward to reading more!

  • RinkieTinkie
    June 28, 2007

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    Pretty Awesome

    I just will go with what pandy and oldpoets said 'it basically painted a beautiful picture in my 'mind with your words.'

  • oldpoets
    June 28, 2007

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    A beautifll picture painted with words. Very well constructed amazeing imagery. This one is right at the top.


  • HugsForEveryone
    June 28, 2007
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    WOW!

    This was SO great that I had to read it aloud. This was painting the most beautiful picture in my mind, and the picture at the beginning really helped with the imagery. Nice job, keep up he great work! Keep writing!
    ~pandy


  • mland5
    June 28, 2007
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    i have one comment about the collaborator Ishtar the godess of love, canbt really think of anything to comment becuase this is a great peice


  • Rele anmwe
    June 27, 2007

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    This is my first time reading your work, oh my God, how beautifully you write. This is sweet serene. The tone and the mood is soft and sugary. I love the flow. Keep up the most marvelous work and bless be the heart that never stops creating beyond its excellency

  • Ishtar
    June 26, 2007

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    As you say you continue to be amazed by my artwork, I will say, with all honestly, that I'm always blown away by what you come up with to write for the pieces that I provide for you.

    This is wonderful. As wonderful as every other one you have done so far. Great job, Paul!

    I better get my brush ready. We can't keep you waiting. Teehee! Muah!


    -Reni


  • catz Moderators member
    June 24, 2007

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    Awww, another beautiful collaboration between two fine artists Your poems and artwork always meld so perfectly and this is just one superb example.

    Keep them coming, you two. I always love and appreciate the beauty of your mingled words and paintings.


    Dee


  • Legend silver member
    June 24, 2007

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    What a joy it is to read such poetry You always manage to show rhyme off at its very best. Who could not enjoy such talent A wonderful piece Thank you


  • Arrianna MacEwan
    June 23, 2007
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    perfect

    Your works are always so fun to read. Great work my friend.

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