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"If I Were An Angel'

                    'If I Were An Angel'

If I were an Angel'
I would watch over you,
all of the time.
Not just when you sleep,
but all day and night'
to keep you safe,
and at Peace'.

I would guide you'
right where you should go,
and in case you didn't know'
I would be holding your hands,
following right beside you.
I will show you the way,
to a 'heavenly-place'.

If only I were an Angel'
I could stand beside you,
all of the time'
with a keen and watchful-eye.
I would make the whole world right,
for you,
every single day,of your-life...

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  • badddgirl
    August 16, 2007

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    Amazing!

    This is the exact words I would love to say to my children.
    Very sweet heartfelt poem, Love it!

    If only I were an Angel'
    I could stand beside you,
    all of the time'

  • hurtgurl
    August 14, 2007
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    Beautiful writing here


  • debilynn gold member
    June 25, 2007

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    this is a beautiful write.it flows well and the imagery is superb. thank you for sharing this. keep writing! God bless you always


  • Airborne Ed silver member
    June 23, 2007

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    This poem is breath taking. It is filled sith so many special qualities. I am just in awww of how wonderful this piece really feels. I have read this poem over a few times and now I sit in reflection and I know without question, You are such an angel.

    I would like to thank you for sharing this with me, as it makes me feel special just knowing how it was inspired.