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bandage

Why does fate boomerang on me
whenever I venture to try it?
How many times can I bandage my soul?

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  • DancingRed
    July 3, 2007

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    Powerful metaphor, particularly the comparison between fate and a boomerang. Most interesting.
    These two questions are very soul searching. Beautifully written.
    Thanks for entering.
    DancingRed.


  • Florida Sunshine
    June 24, 2007

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    As many as it takes til you don't have to bandage your soul. Its a great write especially for those who've been burned in relations more than once... Thanks for submitting this in my contest!