Love is a pin its makes you bleed
Love is a bullet it makes you scream
Love is a mirror it shatters all around
Love is what you got pain is what you found
Author notes
Option 1
A contest entry
- Quickie ~ Pick Your poison ~ Taking Pre-writes by blondone.
425 points, ended September 1, 2007, 8 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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thin line between love and hate great job on writing this and thank you for entering and good luck
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Oh, i like the last verse a lot, its rad.
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Is it bad that this makes me laugh?
And not laughing at the writting, but the meaning behind the words themselves.
And not laughing at you, but that love sucks.
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ouch... how sad. i can relate with this.
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