Arouse me with just a smile
Bare your soul in fiery passion
Caress my breasts tenderly
Delight me as a woman
Embrace all of me that you see
Feel my heart pound ever faster
Give me the love I long for
Hear my sighs of passion burst
Into the depths as you make me flow
Just let your inabitions run wild
Kiss me in hidden places
Let me feel your desire awaken
Make me lose complete control
Navigate then thrust upon me
Open the petals let the flower bloom
Press deep, it welcomes you
Quench your thirst within
Release, feel the pleasure it brings
Sensations that make you
Tremble as you thrust to completion
Until I collapse on top of you
Vehement to please you even more
Wanting this feeling to never end
Xcitement rises and passion flows as
You touch gently my erogenous
Zone
In a list
A contest entry
- ALPHABETTI SPAGHETTI by Silent Cougar.
850 points, ended June 28, 2007, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Great Mom,
26 beautiful pearls....
'Twould learn of yours the winning art,
And quickly steal the rest.
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wow!
a hot number indeed, and using the ABC`s of love. Well done and enjoyable to read.
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Wow! I didn't know you wrote sensual poetry Sandygram. This is a good piece, I like the alphabetical nature of it. Good luck in the contest.
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Whew!
Sweet dear Sandy,
This piece caught me off guard and somewhat speechless. The poem is absolutly brilliant at every level. I see you turned up so "heat and passion" in this one and did a magnificient job. I may give it a whirl...contest sounds like fun and challenging for sure. You really penned this one my dear
I doubt you need it but I wish you the very best of luck in the contest!
Love you
David
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Oh My what are you doing? trying to blow the main chip in my computer This contest seems to be bringing out the devil in the female poets. A great write did you expect me to say less Excellent good luck in the contest
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My dear
I was reading this to Tang and he was loosinf it He firdt thoughI was resding to him, tham not for this is the last time iI will read for the poor half blind guy. -
I write to let you know I think about you,
L est you not decipher how I feel.
O ur relations gives me courage to reveal
V ain hopes I've long since harbored silent for you.
E ven though right now you are just my light,
Y our closeness to me makes me want much more,
O pening a barricaded door,
U nraveling the veil that hides my ends.
Mom, This is great as you are.
Adore you.
Prem
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EXCELLENT
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Nice Comment!! Thank you for readin and leaving a nice comment. Sandy
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Wow, Sandy this is a great piece.
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Thank you for stopping by Melba. Always nice to hear from you. Take care, Sandy
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a beautiful sensual poem. this is a lovely poem without going over the edge. thank you for sharing this. best wishes in this contest. keep writing! God bless you always
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Wonderful Comment my friend. Sandy
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SMOKIN A---Z
WOW, you have covered it all from A-Z and sensual in an understatement, HOT HOT!! Delivered with class as always. Very Well DONE!! SMOKIN as Pennsylvanians would say..CLEAR the dew from the glass so I can read another..STEAMY!!
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WOW... this poem is PERFECT in every way. The flow is so beautifully done. Everything about your poem is just flawless and displays the true beauty of your heart and soul.... You really are a great poet and writter..
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incredible work
What a wonderful alphabet poem you have crafted. The poem takes you just far enough and is really sensuous. This is quite an effort Sandy. It is so hard to do these and you have aced this poem. It's incredible.
Love and hugs - joanne
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Oooh yesss how wonderfully and awesomely sensual this is!
Very, very nice, my friend!
Most passion filled and tastefully written!
Wish you all the best in this contest!
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woohoo!!!!somebody get me a towel, this is just the bees knees.
Hear my sighs of passion burst
Open the petals let the flower bloom
Tremble as you thrust to completionI like this one, you got me good time this time around. Well done and what an entry, pheweeeee!!!
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