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War children

Let us celebrate the end of this war.
Let us cheer for the children who survived this bloody war.
Let us save the cherish whine of his parents being their shield to live.
This war allowed his only brother become a man to fight in it
And, his sisters tend whose only fight in the war were the bombs that only maimed.
Cheer up this child for his only scars are superficial since he only lost his parents.
Smile with this child for he did not know what sparked that war.
How bad do you want it be for this child?
Should we put on a T-shirt for him that announces his survival of this war with parents as shields in the blood of his brother's?
Do not sweat for this child for he will not be alone with this shared story.
Be happy that he does not have to follow his brother’s path.

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  • SpydurPoet gold member
    August 5, 2007

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    Wow. That was vivid and intense. The emotions in it were extremely powerful and chilling. There was a lot of anger in it. Please consider entering my contest on history.
    Write on.
    ~*~SP~*~