I promise to keep you tight
with every single sinful fight
mom and dad can't ruin you
but I don't know what to do
the yelling and screaming kills
and it's all about the bills
it's ok sis, we'll be ok
mom has nothing more to say
I know it's way to scary
we will get thruogh it carrie
grab my hands and pray
think of everything to say
dad grabs me by the neck
he's a total drunkin wreck
tears stream down my face
something I cant erase
the pain in my heart
it's been ripped apart
it's ok sis, we'll be ok
mom has nothing more to say
I know it's way to scary
we will get thruogh it carrie
grab my hands and pray
think of everything to say
my sister never had a chance
takin by daddys lance
death awaits my lonly mind
if only daddy was kind.
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#6.
Write a song about anything. It has to be lyrics though. With this option, please put in your authors notes what type of music the song would be put to.
to the beat of mocking bird by eminiem (can't spell)
its about a brother and sister who have to stick by each other to get through child abuse, but the dad kills them both.
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wow, In the beginnning I was so connected to it because it reminded me of me and my lil sister when we were younger. we used to cry for a long time while my mom and dad would scream downstairs for hours. I used to take care of her. trying to make her stop crying by singing to her. it was the scariest worst memories I have. nice job on the poem. Made me a bit teary eyed with memories. with love and giggles, the white rabbit
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aww thats so sad!!!! =(
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This is really sad, but it's also really beautiful. The poem flows very well, and the rhyme sounds totally natural.
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I LIKE IT!
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ty =)
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Omg! I love it. Thank you so much for entering my contest, hunni. The song was amazing. It had a certain ring to it. I loved the chorus. This is sooo sad, but absolutely incredible.
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