Dry my tears
They pain inflicted
Through harsh words
Leaves me speachless
With anger corsing through me
The ignorant, arogant people
Inconsiderate Asshole
Even though it wasn't directed to me
I felt it,
We cry from all the anger
Wanting to hurt the person more
Conforting my friends
No one hurts my friends
Never to talk to them again
A friendship rip to pieces
I'm glad it's ended
I'm glad they're gone
Forever more
My hate for that person
Over rules
A contest entry
- I WANT REAL EMOTION!!!! Cathartic writing - Open to everyone by theworldisquiethere.
650 points, ended November 8, 2007, 35 entries
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Please tell me what you think
Comments
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I really liked the line "Even though it wasn't directed to me
I felt it" because it rung true. Sometimes you feel the impact of something hateful even if it wasn't towards you.
Good write and thank you for entering!
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Wow, where did you learn to write so good,That was very expressive.
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