Dear mom,
OF the years of fear and abuse to put me through I thought once I left I'd be fine but the memories of you taking my childhood and life away. So I dedicate this to the old and fearful me who didn't have a mom but an evil mother. Why are you so happy when i'm so sad I am your daughter . How dare you not believe me when I told you about grandpa sexually malesting me and then you beat me instead of hold me. I'll find the me that you took from the world.
Love,
Ronda
Author notes
1-Write a poem about violence you suffered through either years of abuse or a one time attack that changed your life.
A contest entry
- ♥ Withstanding The Pain ♥ ....................... ♥-||Dedicated to my Mother||-♥ by Bruised.Roses.
450 points, ended July 24, 2007, 15 entries
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this is good but you chose the wrong option...this poem is about abuse you suffered...kinda a letter.....there are many options that can fit this piece....just not the one you chose so please fix the option and let me know.
xox
Tash -
XRazorzxLullabyX,
I'm sorry about you mom dear. keep me posted on her condition!
Love,
Ronda
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