Reading Sylvia Plath
Why am I so taken?
Cutting words
Filled with despair
Insulate me
Like a blanket
I want to hear more
The feeling of closure
To this seemingly never ending
Journey
Is in my hands
Holding its current form
In this small pill
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Written August 13th, 2003
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Plath, huh? Well I guess reading her won't make you write of daisies and butterflies LOL
In all seriousness,I liked your poem and thought you were able to bring your feelings to the page well. The desire to know and to not want to, to feel and to be numb all mixed uyp together. At least that's what I got out of it.
Take care of yourself,
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Ohhh this is a deep one too, I like this it shows great pain and suffering.. and it is as though you are trapped!
"Insulate me
Like a blanket
I want to hear more
The feeling of closure"
I feel this way to sometimes .. even though I know im trapped and being Overpowered by him, I cant pull myself away.. even though sometimes I dont necessarily want to be free of him!
if that made any sence at all lol .. hey, its late !
*rachel*
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Good write it flows well and is unquie. I think thats spelled wrong lol. Sorry. Good write.
~*Flawed Destiny*~ -
Short n sweet
Keep it up
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Great wright keep up the good work.
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