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The Eclipse

A fantastical display,
As fireworks starburst
Igniting the sparks of dark emotions
And a desire for destruction.

Intrigued, mystified spirits
Marvel at the sophistication
Of the illumination
As provoked flames dance across the night

Perplexed at the loss,
As the ball of kinetic frustration
Slows at the approaching flat,
Sparking - explodes

Leaving the darkside of the moon
Guarding the earth
In it's black shroud
Hiding humanity from the sun





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  • theDARK1 gold member
    June 25, 2007

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    interesting take on the wordbank as it was done in an exceptional written form. love eclipses since it does always allows for a DARKside, DARK.