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The Power of Me

Don't cry for me
I'll make it
I have the strive
And I don't take shit

Your sympathy
Means nothing to me
I'm strong now
So let me be

I walk away
To prove a point
I've got class
That others don't

I shine down
Upon the sky
Don't you dare
Ask me why

Tomorrow will be
A better day
With me alive
The peace will stay

The ocean reflects
The color of my eyes
The sound of rain
Echoes my cries

My stare is deep
It pulls you in
I will tell you
What doesn't have to be a sin

Let my curves
consume your soul
And let your feelings
Take their toll

I can fight
I'd kick your ass
Don't even think
About giving me sass

As soft as sweet
As sour as strong
As clean or mean
As right as wrong

The power of my mind
The smooth of my skin
The depth of my gaze
Is just where I begin

My talk like a song
My walk like a stream
The grace of my stretch
Gives of some steam

One day they'll know
Soon they will see
And all will give in
To the power of me

Author notes

Got bored one night and started writting. This is just what came out. I was in a very good mood.
~I know the rules~

Contest: So, this kinda goes with your number 1. I just thought this one might cheer you up and give you confidence. If it's not what you're looking for let me know and I have another one.

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  • Jessi-desensytized
    July 5, 2008

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    And all will give in
    To the power of me

    that line right there made it for me!!!
    that line alone gives anyone strength!!!

    great job and good luck in my contest!


  • parntsoftwins
    January 2, 2008

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    This poem shows your strength within your self! It was a very powerful piece! Alot of times I forget the power within myself, and tend to let the disease over power me, when those times approach I will return to this poem and remind myself! Thank you, ~Nikki


  • KittieLyyn
    July 9, 2007
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    very awesome poem. loved it.


  • Dlvvanzor
    June 28, 2007

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    THIS IS PERFECT FOR HER! And it even has the feeling of her favorite show's main character, who she relates to a LOT. Thank you! This is definately getting sent. Perfection.

    Thank you for entering,
    -Dlvvanzor