she tasted like Sunday
mourning in a red dress,
when black&white was the
theme of the day
with insanity in a cheshire smile
(and wasn't that just an oxymoron?)
because really, the hatter
had to learn his tricks
somewhere...
with a double.barrel.shotgun
hidden in the clockwork orange
you know she had it coming...
Red queens,
convicted innocents
& Jacks with an inferiority complex
make the apple go 'round
This house of cards is sure to fall
because there's death smirking behind that one white rose petal
Author notes
Alice In Wonderland hun
In a list
A contest entry
- [HappyEndingOrJustTheEnd] by whiterabbit..
450 points, ended August 13, 2007, 31 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Speechless!
This is definitely my absolute favourite out of your Alice series!
Wish I could leave more then 3 clappies
♥
Stay safe
~Manda
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My my my....what a way with words,love
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This is just jaw-dropping...
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Wow, this is amazing. Darling, you are a fabulous poet and this piece shows that ♥
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I fucking loooove Alice in Wonderland and have since I can remember. I love what you did with this hun. Amazing. Oh, I also love the clockwork orange part. This is wonderful to draw my little sleep deprived self in so much. I just love this and now I want to watch the movie but I guess I'll have to wait till I get home eek. Beautiful job sweetie, I love it.
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fuckingamazingggggggg. loveeeeeeeeeealkesjdfljadskl;jgflasjdg.
love.
ily, babehhh. -
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^_^
Thank you so much honey!
ILY
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jawdropping[fxcking]fantastic
*grins* Thank god sweetie!! some one who wrote about alice in wonderland && actually wrote something so fantastic!!
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im in love with this dolly;; coz it makes me think ^_^
Bahh, now i want to watch alice in wonderland.. i think i may. It will never be all innocence after reading this [SUCSESS!!]
xoxo
ILY doll
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Awe. This awesome! I love it! Great Job!!! Kudos! Alice In Wonderland is the best!!!
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Aww.
This was fantastic princess.
Alice In Wonderland, Is fucking amazing, I watch it to cheer me up.
Awwww! again!
Love you sweety!
xxxxxx
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