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Let Me Dream!

Fantasies are bliss,
Always end in a kiss.

A night with you,
our love so true.
A walk under the stars
Heaven releases their bars
Hand in hand feel tender touch
miles and miles nothing too much
A night in heart in one piece only
Will no longer be so lonley
No more pain
No more bad dreams
Moon light face gleams
Pull me aside, gaze into eyes
Suck lips in tongue mine,
Hearts entwine
Say you love me
Eyes want to see
And one day soon
Suns and moons
Twilight of stars
in our heaven's bars.

Dont wake me love,
Let me Dream...
Dream !

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  • Sinfully Yours
    July 11, 2007
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    ha ha! i can soooo relate to this one! its very deep in its own sense and thats what i like about fantasies! and its true! you should stand your ground and don't let anyone stop you from dreaming, no matter how big or impossible it may be! great job and good luck!


  • glued-to
    June 23, 2007

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    I wish love could stay like this forever. dreams are very happy, because you're safe in them, and they can be whatever you want. you conveyed this well


  • forbidden-colour
    June 23, 2007

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    I Want To Cry.. This Is What It Used To Be Like With Me And My.. X Boyfriend.
    But I Guess He Moved On [With A Blonde]
    After 7 Days;
    Wow, That Was A Long To Get Over Me Eh?
    Lol.

    Beautiful Poem Sweetheart;
    One Of The Best .x.



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