Rising from the ashes and dust,
alighted by a simple spark,
the Fire Demon arises.
When he reaches his full power,
he will walk burning, and destroying,
wreaking havoc in the world around him.
He feels no pain, no regret,
no love, and no sympathy.
He feels nothing!
Give him time, and our world will be but ashes!
A contest entry
- 10 Entries, picture inspired. 10 lines. Anon. by Naridill.
300 points, ended June 25, 2007, 5 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Nicely penned and inspired. I love the words, the meaning and the way it was expressed.
Thanks for entering and much luck.
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Well Well
walking fire Demon is actually a truth, if you see the walking fire Demon that I recognize if the envy that takes form of a world wide havoc.
A short and good piece, keep up!!!
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Cool...I mean hot....
Tis a very interesting piece. ^_^
Very descriptive.
Good luck ^_^
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Great work and imagery in this one!
YIKES! I hope that I never bump into that guy!
lol Thanks for sharing this and good luck to you
with it in the contest. Keep up the great work
here!
Jeremy0826
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