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Beauty's Beast

Dare I take this moment,
where light settles amongst your eyes;
glistened copper- fixated.
Dance with me, for no more tears
can escape what lies within.
Your sorrow is my pain,
but in this time, frozen, let us hold comfort.
Do not fear tomorrow,
let us live for today;
for I am your beauty; and you, my beast.

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  • Quiet places gold member
    June 23, 2007

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    Unique and Creative!

    Very well done Storm!! This is an awesome poem! Love your creativity and imagery! The emotions are so real and heartfelt. I really love it, Don


  • Griswold silver member
    June 23, 2007
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    Nice

    3 bunnys...heh