Nothing as I see it,
No one here as it seems
I stand here in darkness
Feeling broken hearted and thinking of broken dreams
Questions never answered
Past cannot be told
Feeling around to see where I am
Wishing fantasies would come unfold
Light comes to life
You are here by myside
I smile, you smile back
But lies are what I find
"Come to light tell me now why have you decieved me"
You say "I have not decieved you, you decieved yourself for I have told you not one truth. But still you have believed me"
A contest entry
- The Pain That Love Brings by Sesheta.
600 points, ended September 10, 2007, 64 entries
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Please tell me what you think, honestly
Comments
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Please edit some typos and grammars that I have spotted...also, the last line runs over, can you space it into two lines? And why the sporatic punctuality?
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