Amid my own sorrows,
a la mode,
to better myself for me.
Consigning yourself from my needing you,
your heedless heart weighs down my pain.
bowing me out,
in my fragile state.
Light of the fact you don't look back,
my eyes besmirch myself.
In two friends one aspires to.....
condolences and support,
calling apon for enjoyment.
All the same,
an expensive price paid
to faulse ambitions.
Among my own sorrows,
I shall solo past both
into self glory
topping my mountain.
A la mode
Author notes
Well this is the venting of a punk last fiew days......tell me what you think....it has been a while since i wrote a poem i have been working on picture editing, essay and such.
I really just want to be cared about by some one other then my family. I really hope that doesn't sound terrible because i don't mean it to put my family down. I just have feeling for something more from the people around me. :)
ps. MY SPELLING! lol help me!
A contest entry
- Anything && Everything (Shoot me up side the head) --all ages-- by Marilyn..
475 points, ended August 11, 2007, 58 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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wow this is really good.
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i think we all desire to be loved by others than just family... and all your real friends would say the same... you would be amazed at how many of your friends loved you if you took the time to check with them... well done
cheers
Jen
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there comes point in a person's life when they must walk alone....
Keep up the writing and thanks for entering
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i liked it. you sound like a genious! you really do lol no joke. sorry about last night but it's great that your dad got texting!! This is my favorite of yours thus far and i'm amazed at how far your writing has matured lately. please keep it up!!
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