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Evil Friends

You said we were friends

throu the tears and the blood

You said we always be

best buds

til the day came when 

I needed you most

but then I found out

that you were a hoax

I thought we were friends from life to the end

I thought you would be my very best friend

Come to find out

you used me and lied

so I cut and I cut to

make up that time

You were my friend

You gave me hope

You kept me away from

my razor and knife

but I guess it was all

fake and a lie

So tonight will end in

a sad,sad way

cause I will be dead

for your evil ways

Author notes

I think that people should think that when they have best friends or friends they shouldn't betray them like that.One of my friends did that to me thats why i made this poem.

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  • cupcakecultx33
    November 17, 2007
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    Very moving. Brilliant


  • flipped-confusion
    July 13, 2007

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    wow, good job. love this poem. its so true friends say they got your back, when they really dont, if anything they stab you in the back. anyways, its a really good poem.


  • supershez
    July 5, 2007

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    i can relate to this
    some of my mates r like that
    most of them are true
    ppl change aswell...its like why i loved you in a non gey wey
    excelent write xxx


  • a dying soul x
    June 23, 2007

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    i really like this
    coz so many friends say they'll be there when they arent
    powerful
    well done
    S xx