Waiting to die

May tonight be the time that

I finally die

I grab my blade

and cut really deep

lie on the bed

let the darkness inclose

May this be the time

that my emotions reveal

Let my blood run out and

my tears stay frozen

May this be the time

that my dreams come true

I've waited for this day for

o so long

I've waited for this momment

when i will be gone

I've waited and waited

for this day to come

for which I will die

in the memory of

none

Please tell me what you think

By me, right now

Adding your comment:
cupcakecultx33
November 17, 2007
Edit | Reply

I love this one... you are amazing
r a w r
October 17, 2007
Edit | Reply

HELL YES!
i love it.
o-EverChanging-o
August 24, 2007

Edit | Reply

I've felt like that before, and I've thought about cutting myself. I haven't 'cause, I'm never left alone for along time.
nevergoingback
June 29, 2007
Edit | Reply

i really like it. It really makes the reader feel what u were feeling when u wrote that. Your a really good poet.