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Strangled Silent

 




Blood spat,

from coke bottles chewed,

tongue is left deformed

      and raped -

                 void of expression

 

Resuscitate

    the brain with tarred memoirs

        of childhood cravings -
                                           unsated;

 

 

as eardrums implode

   from pitchy shrieks embedded

                 in white padding;



and whispers

    are morphed to silence -

 

                             strangled by chaos.



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  • Tangled Angle
    July 29, 2007
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    *echoes previous comments*

    Lol


  • Tangled Angle
    July 21, 2007

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    I remember this one. One of my favorites of yours, and still it sounds excellent. Great job, as usual. You never cease to impress me.


  • kennethlaney
    July 13, 2007
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    Very good

    Interesting poetry!
    "BOO"

  • Tangled Angle
    June 22, 2007
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    I love it. Powerful message.
    Just excellent.
    Good luck to you.


  • Ryno
    June 22, 2007

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    I think you used all of the sense on this . Holy Shit Bel, everytime I read one of your poems, honestly, you just leave me awestruck; the intensity you are able to pen is unbelievable. Thank-you for the write!


    Ryan

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