rapture beast
of my soul , of my soul
capture me,
once your voice,
for I’ve caged
your barbaric spirit
since the yore
of evil birth;
your sublime skin
in my good furs
ugly murderer
forced into a hue
not yet suiting,
your paws are trimmed
with retribution weapons,
trickling my neck
in the colour of
your eyes;
shackled by the ropes
I tied you in,
stitched with memories
and sewn with hiding,--
-----------my mouth rivets;
screaming curses
I’ve never heard,
you enter my body,
my eyes tinted with yours,
my remorse disincarnated
by your spell.
Author notes
Option One; Inspired by picture. Dear Amanda, you are an amazing artist.
A contest entry
- A cascade of magical options are flying in your face!!!!!! by AutumnsFlame.
415 points, ended June 27, 2007, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Shoot.
Comments
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I like your wordplay in this poem... it was good for a freeverse... Thank you for your kind words on my drawing.... you did it justice.... Thabnk you for entering my contest and good luck.

