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other's -self -war


rapture beast
of my soul  , of my soul
capture me,
once your voice,
for I’ve caged
your barbaric spirit
since the yore
of evil birth;

your sublime skin
in my good furs
ugly murderer
forced into a hue
not yet suiting,

your paws are trimmed
with retribution weapons,
trickling my neck
in the colour of
your eyes;

shackled by the ropes
I tied you in,
stitched with memories
and sewn with hiding,--

-----------my mouth rivets;
screaming curses
I’ve never heard,
  you enter my body,

my eyes tinted with yours,
  my remorse disincarnated
  by your spell.





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Option One; Inspired by picture. Dear Amanda, you are an amazing artist.



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  • AutumnsFlame
    June 27, 2007

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    I like your wordplay in this poem... it was good for a freeverse... Thank you for your kind words on my drawing.... you did it justice.... Thabnk you for entering my contest and good luck.