::Take me to the backseat baby::
Hold me [close] in this [crowded space]
We can >>>hide<<< alone inside the
.locked.doors. && .tinted.windows.
You can [touch me] as you please
and the >>>leather seats<<< will hide my
SCREAMS
In the middle of the desert;;
no one can find us anyways.
My {fingernails rip} into the --seats--
and leave sm-sm-smudges
on the windows
As you .s.w.e.a.r. this is more
than just a
::backseat♥romance::
Author notes
Options: Love, dirty pretty.
A contest entry
- Anything. by Sonofdead.
800 points, ended June 26, 2007, 138 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - ~*~All Your Dirty Pretty Comes Here~*~ by xxRainbowDawnxx.
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Cool atmosphere and thoughts.
Thank you for entering,
Best of luck. -
I love how well all of your writing flows... it doesn't seem forced at all and it's so beautifully tragic. I always get to the end and all I think is... whoa.
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Yeah quite a lot like whoring as well, but more someone being a little promiscious in nature... I can relate to this. Men will do anything to convince you a little touchy touchy is something more than just that, touchy touchy. Sick really, but what can us woman do but weep in this backseat we take [as the men drive]. Thanks for your entry.
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"and leave sm-sm-smudges
on the windows
As you .s.w.e.a.r. this is more
than just a
::backseat♥romance::"
I loved those lines.
This was great
And cleverly written. :]
Nice job<3 -
Well, that sure woke me up. Interesting write, and good luck in the finals.
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this is awesome.. i love it
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this is a really great dirty pretty...i really loved it...great piece...keep writing
xXsewn2getherXx
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