Stick a hook up your nose
Pull out your brain
You say I am mad
But I swear I'm sane
Drive a knife into your chest
Carve my name deep
Press a little harder
When you call me a creep
Retrieve ten needles--
One for each fingernail
Just stand there grinning
As you helplessly wail
Upon the rack
Stretched 'till you swoon
Don't worry my pet
You'll awaken soon
Now allow me to introduce you
To the Scavenger's Daughter
Before I am through
You'll beg to be inside her
Acid or fire?
Which do you prefer?
Not that it matters
I'll use both, you can be sure
A little skin off here
Maybe a digit or two
If I take much more
There'll be nothing left of you
Tears now streak your face
Not a big surprise
But something I can cure
By tearing out your eyes
You're just about dead
Let out one last scream for me?
Can't? Then allow me to oblige
By shattering your knee
Good boy, Good boy
You've served me well
Now into the Iron Maiden
The rest of your seconds to dwell
Haha, that was fun
Pleasurable as sex
But now I need a new toy
Will you be next?
Author notes
The Scavenger's Daughter that I refer to here is the one that is described as the original form of the Iron Maiden (There are at least three devices called "Scavenger's Daughter")
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Very well done. Amazingly written.
'Tears now streak your face
Not a big surprise
But something I can cure
By tearing out your eyes'
My favourite part
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This is brilliant. The way it is written, amazing...
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Thank you muchness ^_^ I'm glad you enjoyed it
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Your welcome!
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I love this. It is so violent and creepy.
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lol, I'm glad you enjoyed it. Of course I would be a finalist (Or was that a rhetorical question?)
((and sorry for the long reply time--I've been out of town for a while))
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What a creative mind you have!
It inspires me a great deal
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very creepy but very good i love it i mean nowim gunna write like this again lol (thats write im obsesed 2)
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^_^ Glad I could entertain and inspire you
Thanks loads and bunches ^^
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