Enter disturbia, mentaly insane
Tender flesh ripped broken bones
pulled from socket crushed on stone
skull exploded splattered brains
no you'll never be the same
Flames engulf skin blisters burns
lungs fill up, smoke, pain
blood drips from lips, eyes, nostrils
pus to the surface, flows, never slows.
"You will die,
you will die,
you will die
Motherfucker get out of my face,
I'll make you dig your own fucking grave!"
nails rip flesh fingers grip spine
crushing life, killing time
impaled heads on sticks
they were all fucking pricks
it's butcher time
lets kill the swine
hang upside down
lop off head
bleed them dry
this is hate
I hate you
this is hate
I hate you,
all of you.
Go die.
And I'm the only one who'll ever say
eating flesh was sexual experience.
And I'm the only one who'll ever say
eating flesh was a sexual experience.
And I'm the only one who'll ever say
eating flesh was a sexual experience.
And I'm the only one who'll ever say
eating flesh was a sexual experience.
And I'm the only one who'll ever say
eating flesh was a sexual experience.
You're a fucking mess!
Author notes
Pree much, this how I think alot...
Sooo...
I'm not really putting myself in anyones shoes...
I'm just fucked up.
I can change it if I have to make it into some sort of story...
But this is pretty much just a strip of my own hateful thoughts about the world...
Fighting back these impulses is almost impossible at times, that's why I go into my room, listen to metal really loud, and scream, and punch things...
Cannibal Corpse
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ya i love that last line too, and the repetition like a morbid mantra or something. Great!!!! the rest is pretty good too, i like the abruptness of your style. direct, in your face sort of thing. good luck sir!
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BAH HAHA
WOW! YOU DID AWESOME!!!! THIS IS.....WOW....I LOVE IT! It's so sick, demented and fucked up, hell, KUDOS AND CONGRATS! OK OK, soooo.....i have some lines here i like, let's see, there is THIS ONE:
"And I'm the only one who'll ever say
eating flesh was a sexual experience."
AND THIS ONE:
"I'll make you dig your own fucking grave!"
nails rip flesh fingers grip spine
crushing life, killing time"
AND OH, DEFINITELY THIS ONE:
"hang upside down
lop off head
bleed them dry"
Haha, also, congrats on listening to metal, i'm with ou in that one. You should go check out my profile at the bands i listen to, you mihgt know a lot/ALL of them
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Hehehe..
Yes, I know all of those bands...
They are amazing, I must say...
Thankyou for the comment, It's nice to meet someone twisted like me.
Oh, and I like your name...
Cradle of filth.
<3
Good band.
Prehaps we can chat more, you seem like a cool person.
If you want to add me, my MSN is on my page...
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