The bass strums softly
Music washes over me
Metal-wound strings sing
Author notes
my first AP poem
comment please!
Comments
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Simple yet Says so much!
That poem is wonderful! It only has 3 lines but it says so much! Like all haiku's, you can only write a certain amount, and it takes real talent to fit so much meaning in those 3 lines! You deserve credit for your poetry! It is amazing! I hope you can really get it published!
Please add more poems! I really like reading them! It is so fun! When you do add more poems, I will comment like crazy! Can't wait to read more!
By the way, you have 2 copies of this poem, I don't know why...just wanted to tell you that in case you did not already know!
See ya! -
kools
short, simple, awsome.
great write, really enjoyed reading, it has alot in it but is written with little bit of words, awsome, again great write
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this is beautiful!!
so pretty - I like the second line: "music washes over me." fantastic!!
Lise
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wow!!! this is wonderful!!! write some more!
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