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Never A Word
Two mimes in a box
Gasping for a breath of air
Screams absorbed in glass
Faces behind the white paint
Kisses frozen in blue tints
Final words unheard
Caught in a black and white world
Scattered thoughts in piles
Fighting to just remember
Their tears start falling again
Never left alone
Miserable place to be
On display locked here
The end is the easy part
Can’t hear the sounds of “good-bye"
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Author notes
Being homebound for many years lends itself to many fears...Most importantly, being trapped without help...which fault lies on my side since I keep myself hidden in more ways than one...
A contest entry
- Deepest Secrets or Fears! by brokenangel13.
375 points, ended June 24, 2007, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Very creative!
This is artistically very creative...it has visual imagery...but more importantly it displays a working knowledge of the mechanics of psychological evaluation...the mind works in strange ways its wonders to perform!...a very talented write indeed!...regards Dan xxx Bravo!
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Awesome creativity. And great imagery. I fully enjoyed reading this. Although....It did seem forced a bit at times.
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I know the feeling that when you need it the most no one can hear you. Thanks for entering
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