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Nature Walks

The Trees whisper
with small creatures
The winds howl
how insecure now?
The night stalks
with stars bright
The Morning echos
what nice light!
The waters scorn
with chilling fright
Only you walk
How's the sight?

Author notes

Trying a different style...it's good to experiment don't you agree? XD

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  • Kathleen a Nazarene
    July 13

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    OK to experiment, but be ready for the nay sayers! IMHO if you spaced between every second line I think this would look & read better. I like the content, rhyme & timing of this. Good ending! Glad to be your first reader. You really ought to edit this & then enter it in some contests to get more reads!