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Love and Trust

So dark te con of man,
You came to me with opean hands,
To forgive me for te wrongs I have done,
To let me know we can forever run,
So we walked into the setting sun,
From ashes to ashes from dust to dust,
I forver lay in you love and trust

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  • Soten-Jaganshi
    July 19, 2007

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    .... I love the flow and the rhyming was spectacular. But i need the options, your user name and the rules quote in your authors box. and Please spell check.