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Yours...

You, You my friend may betray me
Knock me down
Pick me up
even frown

I will be there, there till the end
Watching and waiting
wanting to defend
teeth clenched

Unconditional is this love, love from my heart
Love from above, this love will never part
Part till death
or evils' scorn
saddening fears

Paved and worn, worn through the years
tired out from the laughter and the tears
only shadowless dreams need apply here
Always though I shall remain Always
Always, I'll be right here, yours
your friend forever dear

Author notes

Dedicated to my very bestfriend of all times. Sometimes she's not always there for me but she tries to be I think. XD
Anyways it's dedicated to her. ^_^

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  • glenn shannon silver member
    June 17

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    that is a ggreat frienship that puts up with the ups and downs of onesided frienship or unbalanced at leat i find after a while if one keeps taking without some giving that relationship wears thin but then i suppose thats conditional as the condition is love me some at least enjoyed this one from your past love glenn


    • Beverlynohime
      June 17
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      Thanks! Damn Glenn...you did go back a ways didn't you. haha thanks for the comment.


  • Tarja
    October 16, 2007

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    Aww Bev, very sweet. I love how understanding you are that you know that we are all people and even BFF's aren't perfect. Thank you so much for entering this piece... Good luck in the contest.


    • Beverlynohime
      October 17, 2007
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      Thank you Tarja! ^_^ Yeah I wrote this awhile back for her...she read it too. ^_^


  • Procrastination
    June 27, 2007

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    Awesome!

    Wow! This is so well writen emotion shown here obviously runs so deep and showing them through this wonderful and touching pem musn't have been that easy. I love the repetative style you've used here, it has proven a very effect technique.
    Welldone on an absolutely fabulous poem!
    I wish you much luck in this contest!
    Emily x


    • Beverlynohime
      June 27, 2007
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      Emily

      Thank you so much! I showed my friend this poem....lol...they liked it...so my work was completely accomplished I suppose....haha
      I just saw this contest and thought this was definately good enough because I do care a lot about this girl. ^_^ Thanks so much for you r support!

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