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Worst Nightmare

A silent scream echoes down the hall
Fearfully wondering
Stumbling onto my worst nightmare

Lying next to you
Blood red and tipped silver
The cause of your undoing

Your gasping breath
Fallen tears
Silence throughout me

A contest entry

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  • MagazinesFall
    June 24, 2007
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    I know this is your kind of poetry, but I think you need to try something up-beat!


  • brokenangel13
    June 23, 2007

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    No way to describe your poem anyway other than short and to the point. You caught my eye.Thanks for entering.