My Hand burning threw my writing
My school work piled
A pencil that broke during a test
The mean looks I get
My life as a whole
Love not being returned
A horror movie without sound
A dream without meaning
A dress without stitches.
All of this and more!
Author notes
we read about this style of poem last year in English! I thought it was kind of cool! Thought I'd try. Mine's not too goo but hey I tried
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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this is kinda sad but i like the way youve painted the picture of life not being all roses its a decent read surprised im the first comment but hell its 800 poems back so i better get reading long road to cove cheers
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haha yeah that's true and I'm not surprised. For the simple reason that some of these older poems and I believe this is one of them as well I posted all at the same time. Within the same day. So I HAD like about 20 people could read or more. I started out with about 40 poems I think.
At any rate thanks for commenting! I'm sure there are many many pieces out there that no one else has commented on. ^_^
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