A path in the mind
we see with soul
followed in heart
towards consequence's
signpost and detours.
Author notes
Word Prompt - Direction
A contest entry
- 15 words 15 entries and 15 minutes only gold place takes all:) by SeaWithYourHeart.
418 points, ended June 22, 2007, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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wow! economically worded, consistently carried out metaphor! this has a matter-of-fact tone to it that fits with your premise and them. well done!
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Thanks so much for the great comment. Didn't impress the judge, but oh well.
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excellent! I'm sure there will be something of yours that I won't like... I just haven't found it yet. I really liked this one.
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Thank you so much. Didn't impress the judge, but that is okay.
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lovely little write
well woven
keep writing
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Thank you for the wonderful comment.
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totally cool write, my friend! If this isn't life, I don't know what is! Well done! Wishing you the best in the contest!
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Thank you for the wonderful comment.
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very good i loved this piece
the direction of thought
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PROMPT? OK EVERYONE THE PROMPT IS *DIRECTION*
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