At the ripe young age
of fifteen,
I am heading somewhere.
This journey has long since started
but it is far from over
and I have the determination
to reach amazing places
and do amazing things.
Though I don't always know
quite which direction I'm going,
my feet tread on
and my head stays up,
and my body never turns to look behind me.
Please tell me what you think
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This piece was quite interesting and has a nice outlook. Keep on moving, but take the time you need to slow down, when you need that time. I loved your wording here and the straightforward message. Keep up the great work and good luck in the contest!
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very good loved your message
and yes you did dont worry
goodluck -
cool!
this is good. but its a bit more than 15 words..?
I like it anyway. :]
shinE* -
PROMPT? OK EVERYONE THE PROMPT IS *DIRECTION*
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