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Torture

I feel so enraged, I want to kill the fuck out of everything, I'll start at the bottom and work my way up, I'll take his feet and toe by toe I'll pry his toenails off with a pair of dull  scissors and then take a dull rusted knife, and the ankles a rusty saw, up to the knee caps and drive a knife into it and drag the knife down, repeat for the other leg, the thighs take a fork and sharpen all the edges and take that fork and jam it into his thighs and twist it, as for the sexual organs, take the sack and cut it off and sew it up and play hacky sack with it, and then make a slit down his shaft and then pour lime and salt into it and then sew it up and drive a rusty nail into it, and drive that nail into the wall, and then take a knife and stab it into the umbilical cord opening and twist the knife around and around and then slice up to his chest, and then carve the knife left and right so it looks like he has a giant tee carved into his chest, and then cut out his heart hold it right in front of him and then squeeze it so tight that is explodes in my hand and then bitch slap him with his own blood

I want to take his head and just mutilate it to a bloody fucking pulp, first I'll take a knife and scalp him very slowly and bloodily so that when I star to work down the face with the knife, there will be a little bit of lubricant to that the knife will slide down easier, I want to take my bare fingers and shove them in to his eye sockets, and slowly pull out his eyes, then I'll make little slits in his nostrils and tilt his head back so I can pour lemon juice in them, I wand to cut off his lips and shove them down his throat, take all the skin on his face and peel it off with a potato peeler, then I will cut out his tongue and slice it into pieces, take his ears and pull on them until the rip off, then completely break his jaw and pull on the lower mandible until I hear every little snap, crack and pop, and then just break off his lower jaw, then I'll remove his head completely by cutting it off

Through the whole time I do this I want to hear him scream like a little fucking bitch, and all I’d say to him is shut the fuck up and take what’s coming to you, and through all the time I torture him I would enjoy every second of it and have a wicked looking smile on my face, yeah today if anybody tries to fuck with me I will kill the shit out of them, so I highly advise to you if you want to escape the pain and torture and suffering then DON’T FUCK WITH ME, and if you want to push your limit then all I can say is DIE MOTHER FUCKERS HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA come and get it BITCHES.

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i was having a very VERY bad day

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  • Aroarathebloody
    August 22, 2007

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    what I was looking for

    I thought there would be a few of these, but really your the only one who wrote hard core gory, fucking nice dude, chick whoever u r...
    then carve the knife left and right so it looks like he has a giant tee carved into his chest, and then cut out his heart hold it right in front of him and then squeeze it so tight that is explodes in my hand and then bitch slap him with his own blood

    this was my favorite part about this poem,
    keep it up, later


  • Lord Viceroy
    August 7, 2007
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    umm...Yeah


  • LittleBoPeep
    June 28, 2007

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    Um...no words to say

    um...um... yea yeck you are strange but i still love ya, cant wait to talk to you again and see you on the outside

  • demongod666
    June 27, 2007
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    DISTURBING

    yeck this really disturbing. i though i had some issues but goddamn yeck i guess when you wanna play and torture people you really put you mind to it. good poem if you wanna call it that but damn dude i though i was sick and twisted, that one pretty much states that i have alot to work on if i wanna try to become more twisted than you.


  • Synthetic-Nightmare
    June 26, 2007

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    ah haha

    THIS WAS BRILLIANT! So full of gore and endless torture, and THIS LINE made me giggle:

    "take the sack and cut it off and sew it up and play hacky sack with it,"

    HOLY FUCKIN SHIT! THIS WAS SOOOO FRIGGEN BRUTAL! The agony, the torture, everything about it. *backs away nervously* Better stay on your good side......

    *runs forth* WAIT! KIDDING! I WANT TO BE NEXT! haha.

    Kudos on the write, i love it! Good luck

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