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Empty

I've already seen everything,
Nothing else to stay and watch,
I've already heard every scream,
No more unshared fears,

This empty world,
Surrounding me,
Nothing else to be or see,
Nothing new,
Sleep now please,

How hard to never look back,
To draw without looking at the paper,
Ever considered a change for the worst,
A change to the usual choice you make,

I've already seen everything,
Horrible sights yet still I've watched,
I've already heard every scream,
How I've enjoyed the company,

And this empty street,
Ahead of me,
Another darkened secret,
To be known,
Another dream,

(Don't look back, and don't move ahead)

And this empty heart,
I've got in me,
Blue veins with icy blood,
That flows,
With every scream,

I've already been through this,
There's no more interest in me,
I've already felt all this,
Happy yet still alone,

How hard to never look back,
To draw without looking at the paper,
Ever considered a change for the worst,
A change to the usual choice you make,

This empty world,
Surrounding me,
Nothing else to be or see,
Nothing new,
Sleep now please,

Nothing to feel.

Author notes

http://www.planetdis.com/cure/midi.html ---> The empty world, thts the midi i chose to write this poem on.

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  • Walking Tall
    June 24, 2007
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    i like this =)
    drawing without looking at the paper
    it's awesome
    SeeJ