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Ice Cream Truck

Music plays from the ice cream truck's horn
Children squeal with joyous delight
Anticipation rises
For that cold frosty treat
To melt in their mouths
A sweet surprise
On hot days
Ice cream
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  • CitrineSunrise silver member
    June 22, 2007

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    The ice cream always tastes better from the ice cream truck than it does from the refrigerator. My brother and I were allowed one visit a week, and we made sure never to miss. Thank you for this memory and good luck in this contest. Peace, Liz


  • green20goblin
    June 22, 2007
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    cool

    i love the triangle image ,very clever -well done


  • Foxydaze14
    June 22, 2007

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    Very adoreable and cute. This is a great children's poem because what child does not like ice-cream? Best of luck to you in the contest