You nasty ass cunt
you've crossed the line
I've let you go once
but i'll kill you this time
You fuck people over
Just because you can
But believe me, this time
you wont do it again
With two men at your side
holding you down
The third one has his way
don't you dare make a sound
He rips off your pants
then he goes for your shirt
I promise you bitch
this is going to hurt
He spreads your legs wide
as he thrusts hard and fast
Don't make a sound
or it'll soon be your last
Once he's finished with you
it's the next man's fun
But its not done yet
he's not the last one
It's the last mans turn
you can feel his breath
He turns you on your stomach
as you wish for death
He caresses your thighs
Now youre on your hands and knees
He's being too rough
Now youre begging him...Please
I warned you from the start
not another sound you will make
You've now pissed them off
it's your life they'll now take
They will slit your throat
strap you in front of a mirror
So you can watch the blood drip
as your life slowly disappears
Author notes
Cannibal Corpse
I just want to say i would never wish this upon anybody...this poem isnt written towards anyone, It was only written for a contest...
A contest entry
- Gore laced Insanity by Synthetic-Nightmare.
750 points, ended July 9, 2007, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Huh. Well I just did Edit your face image under personal information. click my account and scroll down to the bottom. it should work. late night get together tonight?
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Wow...this was an incredibly strong poem, had me hooked to the end, that's for sure! It brings me back to unwanted memories, but other than that it's awsome! Pretty scary though haha
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WHOA!!!! YAY!
YAY! THIS IS AWESOME AND I LOVE THE METHOD OF DEATH!
*happy smile*
These lines:
"They will slit your throat
strap you in front of a mirror
So you can watch the blood drip
as your life slowly disappears "
LOOOVE IT!!!!!!!! KUDOS AND GOOD LUCK!
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yea. i loved it to
really good imagery
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wow! I loved it....great imagery and flow! great job period! keep it up!
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