You're a theif, you're a liar
you're selfish, and a fake
I've had it with you
there's not much more i can take
You've pushed me to the edge
and i've had my fair share
You better watch your back
because violence is in the air
You'll be torchured, beaten
and completely destroyed
Just always remember
I'm through..but i tried
You're a skanky little bitch
and a two-faced dirty hoe
I'll kill you, You cunt
and no one will know
I'll bury your body
deep into the ground
Not a soul will care
you'll never be found
I hate everything about you
now its time for revenge
It's my turn this time
and i'll fight till the end
I'll put you in your place...
trust me, you'll never come back
You've fucked with me too much
now my heart is cold and black
I'll make you go crazy
you'll go out of your fucking mind
Not knowing when i'll attack
will it be from the front, or behind..
But when i've finally done it
and have gotten in your head
The next time i see you
you're gonna be dead
Author notes
Cannibal Corpse
A contest entry
- Gore laced Insanity by Synthetic-Nightmare.
750 points, ended July 9, 2007, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - pain by XxTWLOHAxx.
300 points, ended July 9, 2007, 51 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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good rhyme and rhythm
topic that anyone can easily relate to
colorful and descriptive vocabulary
this poem gets a 10 out of 10 from me
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lovely
oh I do love this one. about your sister maybe? I thinkyou told me about this one, but my memory might just be failing me haha. such violent thoughts... -
WOW. This is such a mean poem. but in a good way. It was really great. i loved reading it!!
awesome work!
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Wow this is awesome!! Good luck in the contest =]
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hahaah
this made me laugh as well. Very sadistic, dark, evil and well written. Hell, i'd wanna stay off your badside! Good luck
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Powerful. The poem was strong and clear. Even though it had a bit of foul language in it, you didnt over do it, and the foul language added to the hate and emotion that was felt in this. Good write,
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