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Welcome to Hogwarts!

Hello and welcome to Hogwart's today,

I must tell you I have much to say.

About some students and things you'll see,

maybe a couple of ghosts or three.


There is of course mischievous peeves,

whom nobody can seem to get to leave.

Then of course there's the fat lady of Griffindor,

who is fat and talkative and passwords her chore.

Then you must know about Albus Dumbledore,

who in all truth is not around anymore.

He was a great headmaster we cannot deny,

but evil slimy Snape gave him the evil eye.

Snape of course being the old potions master,

who wants to rid the world of Harry Potter faster.

Then there is dear old Nearly Headless Nick,

who's bodies a mess and his necks real slick.

We will also meet kind and gentle Hagrid,

who'd mess with him - heaven forbid!

But he has a heart of gold you have to see,

he's really quite a jolly kind chappy!

Then you meet Harry Potter the one who lived,

where Dumbledore blessed him with all he could give.

Then you will meet his dear friend Ron Weasley,

who's personality and attitude is quite easy.

Hermione his other companion a brilliant witch,

impossible rarity if she ever made a glitch.

Perfect and care free these three are best friends,

they help each other til the bitter end.

Draco Malfoy who does appear to be evil,

is quite soft and most certainly feeble.

He couldn't kill Dumbledore for the Dark Lord,

that's why the incident with Snape occurred.

I hope you decide to visit Hogwarts soon,

bring back some cheer and take away gloom.

Then you can meet some more wonderful beings,

your presence in the Great Hall I hope to be seeing.

Author notes


This is an outsiders point of view of Hogwarts.
For those who don't know, this is about Harry Potter.

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  • Antebellum
    July 17
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    excellnet write.
    wonderful take on the prompt.
    thanks for taking the time to enter,
    good luck


  • Lady Michaella
    February 11
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    ooo!! this is awesome.. i love this!!

    -Lemon Bee-
    xx


  • sailor ptolema
    May 28, 2008

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    BRAVO!

    I LOVE THIS! I love Harry Potter and I thought it was just brilliant! All trophies are duly deserved!


  • PonyPride
    January 24, 2008

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    Interesting

    Although this was on the longer side, It was indeed a good poem. I really like the simplicity in this, however at times it seemed a little forced. Also there were parts that did not flow with the rest of it like:
    We will also meet kind and gentle Hagrid,

    who'd mess with him - heaven forbid!

    But he has a heart of gold you have to see,

    he's really quite a jolly kind chappy!

    Overall, well done though and best of luck with this contest. Also, congrats on your previous trophies.


  • Ifyoulovemekillme
    December 1, 2007
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    Gratz

    Congratz on winning silver.
    Loved your poem.
    <33

  • Ifyoulovemekillme
    December 1, 2007

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    Good Luck

    I really like this, although you know that dumbledore asked snape to kill him
    It was really good overall and uhh if you haven't read the 7th book yet..sry for the spoiler.
    Thanks for entering and good luck in the contest.


  • KristyBrainsikk
    September 2, 2007

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    I really like it I think this is the only love poem that I can get through without getting bored. Good luck in my contest.


  • EverxEnding silver member
    July 11, 2007

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    This is nice! Awesome for someone who calls themself an "outsider." It captures a lot of different characters for what they are [for the most part] I'm personally not so sure if Snape is "evil" [but he sure is "slimmy"!!!]
    I had fun reading this the whole way through and as an obesssed Harry Potter person I can say that this is truely amazing!
    Good luck in the contest!


  • Kappa Pyua
    July 10, 2007

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    Amazing

    This is definately a fun poem. I like this one very much, and hope that in the last book there is something about going back to hogwarts even if Harry and his friends don't attend it would be sad if it permanetly closed.UNT


  • miss midnight
    June 22, 2007
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    cool.
    ive never read a harry potter
    poem before.
    but this was really good.
    nice job.


  • Corinthians13-4
    June 22, 2007

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    I like this, very very much. The rhyme sceme: very clever, and the facts: pretty perfect. Oh, how I do love Harry Potter poems. Best of luck in the contest!

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