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The Break-up

I wonder where everyone's going
when there's a race that's yet to be run
when there are stories yet to be told
and epics yet to be sung.

I wonder where everyone's going
when I promised the best of the best
it's still churning out without stopping
and my fingers won't give me a rest!

I wonder where everyone's going
why our world has diminished in size
perhaps it just got rather boring
or another opportunity caught their eyes

I wonder why everyone's leaving
when the real game has barely begun
they could have saved us all much grieving
just by staying and having some fun!

I wonder what makes them decide
to just pull up and leave on some day
I suppose that they feel justified
but the pain never really goes away.

Imagine a team of three friends
who decided to write themselves in
when two of them pull up and away
and leave one alone, hurt within!

I wonder where everyone's going
when my team starts to break up from inside
when the two who should stay go and leave me
and I can't show my pain for my pride

I guess I'll just have to remember
the good times and stories we shared
and perhaps, down the road, I'll give up
and pretend that I never have cared.

Author notes

An ode to my feelings on the break-up of Team 13. We'll miss you, Baka Demon and Artemis Gem, aka Yuuki Haruno and Megumi Aburame!

~Chibi and Aya

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  • Siby Anan
    September 30, 2007

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    Again I read this,
    Again I cry,
    Again I remember,
    All the good times...

    rofls. Yes, I'm reading this again because it's so sad >.<


  • Siby Anan
    August 22, 2007
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    There's I just read it again and I just cried again...


  • Artemis Gem
    June 23, 2007

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    instantly, I think this is supposed to bring a guilt trip on for Yuun chan and me. o.o

    ...

    And woah I was right. Hey, its not broken up, you baka! O.O (OOC MEGUMI moment) Its just, we can't keep up with it like you do! I try to visit every once in a while, but I've gotta keep up with my novel and poems and all that good stuff---
    Aya *grips shoulders* YOU MUST MOVE ON!!!!!!!!
    O.O
    No, I think this is a great poem, and can be applied to more than Team 13--(WHICH PWNS!)---and now, I do feel like I just went on a serious guilt trip, and have the urge to click on teh storywrite link right next to me. ... Keep it up and START WRITING MORE POEMS GIRLLL!!!!!!!!!
    LUV YAAAA!!! *glompage of hugs*

    aburame megumi (the girl with all hte butterflies)


    • Chibi-chan
      June 23, 2007
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      I knew someone was going to say that.

      NO!! HOW COULD YOU SAY SUCH A THING, MEGU-CHAN! SURELY YOU KNOW THAT THE PUREST, WARMEST DEPTHS OF MY YOUTHFUL HEART COULD NEVER SEND YOU ON A GUILT TRIP! I WOULD SEND MYSELF ON ONE BEFORE SENDING...

      Aya: *covers Chibi's mouth* Ahem. Stop sounding like a weird mix of Ayame from Fruits Basket and Lee from Naruto.
      Chibi: Sorry...


  • Siby Anan
    June 22, 2007
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    A-Aya-san...there's just so much emotion put into this...I can't help but...cry >_<


    • Chibi-chan
      June 22, 2007
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      nuhunh you are SO mot crying over this...are you?

      • Siby Anan
        August 22, 2007
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        Oh wow I never noticed you replied to my comment

        Yesh, I was crying crying over this...when I read it before. I even came back to read it again ^^


  • Baka Demon
    June 22, 2007
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    T__T

    Beautiful. My favorite poem of all.

    WE LOVE YOU AYA!!!

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