Days on the beach, nights at the park.
Playing softball or basketball,
enjoying both equally.
The vibrancy of youth,
summer vacations.
Remembering
all the joy,
makes me
smile.
Joyce Le Lievre
(sunny day)
© Joyce A. Le Lievre, All rights reserved
June 22, 2007
Author notes
This is also a group entry, The Titles Challenge Group.
Nonet
A nonet consists of nine lines. The first line starts
with nine syllables and each line decreases the syllable count by one, ending with one syllable word.
Picture is courtesy of; http://www.redtag.ca/images/hotels/1968.jpg
In a list
A contest entry
- Three Rounds in Three Weeks by CitrineSunrise.
600 points, ended June 30, 2007, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Summer Fun by misticmoonlite.
1050 points, ended August 10, 2007, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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This was cute - you know how we love the beach too Nonets are nice ( how do you like them?) well done ~ Mikkey
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Mykeee,
Thank you for the applauses and again such lovely words of praise. I do know how we love the beach. 
This one brought back some wonderful memories for me. I do like the nonets and I will be doing more of them. I'm very happy that you enjoyed this one. Love and God bless you my friend, Joyce 
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very pretty
Nonet,never saw one before,nature has a way of singing her song..thank you for entering and good Luck
PM
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PM, Thank you for the applauses and lovely words of praise, also for hosting this wonderful summertime contest. It's just what the doctor ordered and when I did this one it brought me such awesome memories. I'm very happy that you enjoyed it and thank you for the best wishes. Love and God bless you always in all ways, Joyce
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smiling here
nice nonet. I loved this piece. Well done!! ~Pamela
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Pam, Thank you for the applauses and your lovely words of praise. They are wonderful memories. I'm very happy that you loved this one. Love you my friend, Joyce
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butiful Joyce my friend sounds like a fantastick memory to me and i need to try this form as well i havent did it yet hands u a nanna ice cream while it summer xxx cheeky xxx
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Judie, Thank you for the applauses and your lovely words of praise. nanna ice cream! I hope it's chocolate covered, LOL!
Mmmmmmmmmm, it sounds yummy to me. I'm very happy that you enjoyed this one. Love and God bless, Joyce
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Oh.. I love it! This is my summer in a nutshell.. I mean nonet.
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going,
I remember never wanting them to end back then. It was so fun not to have a care in the world. Thank you for the applauses and your colorful comment that was lovely. I'm very happy that you enjoyed it. Love and God bless, Joyce
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I really loved this I kinda had a day of reflecting,
looking through some old photos remembering youth times, so this was truly a joy to read on such a day.
Thanks for sharing.
Love and Light
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Shey, Thank you for the lovely words of praise. These are such fond memories of growing up. I was very into sports and playing on some good teams was even better. Had to watch out you didn't burn at the beach in the day or it would be tough playing softball or basketball later that day. LOL I'm very happy that you enjoyed this one. Love and God bless, Joyce
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Summers were so much fun when we were young and didn't have an responsibility other than enjoying life as much as possible. Thank you for bringing back some wonderful memories. I am actually having that type of summer myself for the first time in ages. Thank you for entering this contest and good luck. Peace, Liz
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Liz, Thank you for the lovely words of praise and for hosting. I can still see those days like they were yesterday, playing for a couple of championship teams helped. They are wonderful memories. I'm happy that you are getting to enjoy this summer and wish you the best on your upcoming nuptials. Thank you for your best wishes also. Love and God bless, Joyce
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Those are always great memories, something fun, and alive.. Great write keep up the wonderful work!
Lissa
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Lissa, Thank you very much for the applauses and your lovely words of praise. This was only my second nonet, though I do believe is I will grow very fond of them. They are a fun form to use. I'm very happy that you enjoyed the summer vacation. Love and God bless you my friend, Joyce
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