I understand he thinks
He gives until there is nothing left
Cold hearted "No" , petty theft
Every breath I stumble to breath
Without their love who will I be?
My heart is bursting fire and flame
This wild feeling no one can tame
And he knew that
Ashes clutter my mind now
Silence is grey
And so I am left to my own devise
To live under his advice or leave
Either way a sentence I cannot bear
Never to be my “meant to be"
Is worse above all
Forsaken dreams forgotten me
How cruel to be together
it would seem
It wasn’t the plan
That this woman should be with this man
Please tell me what you think
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there is a dieing taking place, before you stop breathing you breath, you breath those last few breaths, when sadness overtakes you every breath is a struggle sometimes you just tell yourself breath, breath deep, it for me doesn't come natural to breath when I am so sad. thanks for the comments I value honest opinions, I am going to rethink the wording to see if there is something else that makes it flow better.
K
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This is good, I like the subtle rhyming.
"Every breath I stumble to breath" I don't understand this line though...everything breath I stumble to breathe?
"Never to be my “meant to be"" love that
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