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beaming (haiku)






beaming
through your eyes -
god











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  • Griswold
    August 11, 2007

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    Oh good one for sure, God does seem to beam through some peoples eyes. I would hope he does mine...Scott


  • poeticweaver gold member
    August 9, 2007

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    wow

    Amazing grace you weave here,
    this is very beautiful.

    Thanks for sharing,
    great one here.

    -Timothy


  • Amera gold member
    June 24, 2007

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    Wonderful! You are certainly into the deep single thought mood lately.


    Love,
    Amera ♥


  • Desire gold member
    June 22, 2007

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    Wow!!

    Powerful piece You have brought forth and Love this Haiku
    Beautifully presented!!
    Wow!!
    Loved it!!

    Best wishes to You in the contest
    Many blessings too
    and much love~ Desire~*~


  • acqua
    June 22, 2007

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    Beautiful and so meaningful these five words woven into such a loving piece. Good Luck in the contest and all the best!~

  • Crystal Chanda Lear
    June 22, 2007

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    Five very wonderful words indeed. Best of luck in the contest with this lovely little piece.

    David Michaels


  • MargaretG silver member
    June 22, 2007

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    Yay!

    This is a very beautiful sight - which we can only see by looking for it. What a loving image this is, dear!


  • Harrisham Minhas
    June 22, 2007
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    Very sweet...

  • Lugh
    June 22, 2007

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    Perfect.

    I was gonna enter this competition, but i could not have said anything more beautifully to the point than that. Well done


  • WolfHeart
    June 22, 2007
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    Wonderful

    You used a sparing of words to imprint a vision on
    our eyes. Well-done!

    Wolfie

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