a bird (haiku)

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• Bruce
  April 7
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  Another really strong one!
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  Griswold
  August 11, 2007
  
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  I know that cat, I lived with him for years!!! another great Haiku. Well done indeed...Scott

  
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  poeticweaver
  August 9, 2007
  
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  wow

  Now that would awake a few things, but that damn bird fell asleep into a deep slumber no doubt.. Thanks for sharing, great job!
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  NoWayJo
  June 30, 2007
  
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  I really like the non-chalant nature of the cat you have drawn by this haiku..It's to actually see this scene before my eyes.
  
  Thank you for this wonderful entry to the contest!
  
  Jo

  
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  Candy6
  June 29, 2007
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  so cute.
• pvenugopal
  June 25, 2007
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  Great yet again.

  
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  Amera
  June 24, 2007
  
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  Fos a short verse this is sad and violent. My heart goes out to the poor bird then the startled cat.
  
  Love,
  Amera ♥
  

  
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  FallingTwilight
  June 22, 2007
  
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  Short and sweet, great haiku.
  
  Have a wonderful day and best of luck in the contest,
  
  FallenPoeticAngel

  
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  Hetha
  June 22, 2007
  
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  This is sweetly funny, and one would think, "ouch!" LOL! This is great! Good luck in the contest.

  
• Mercury Rising
  June 22, 2007
  
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  Short and sweet. You really have a delicate way of handling haiku. Best of luck in the contest.
  
  David