looking in the mirror
deeper than just the surface
deeper than just my bright eyes
and innocent pleasant smile
looking inside my bruised heart
this heart that got hurt
and ended up with no trust
no words to move it
no passion to make it beat
did it turn into a rock?
well they say so
am harsh
am strong
is this wrong?
am lost
and don't know where I belong
they say my words are hard
am not easily satisfied
Am bossy and contrable
But I just like to run things
Just want everything to go right
I remember their mistakes
I forgive
but never forget
These are my imperfections
Author notes
'we're all imperfections, face it'
A contest entry
- Every Part of [im]perfection by WishMeAway--x.
550 points, ended June 24, 2007, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
-
In The Mirror?
you see all this in the Mirroe...or through the looking Glass?...well, this is a very nice composition of words and thoughts.your rhyming skill is perfect..see if you can behold this in the mirror.Very nice work.
-
eventually, things...like this, will not be a bad thing and others wont see it that way.
but this was interesting, i guess i never thought of someone being something that was imperfected.
lovely job on this.
♥ -
this is so sad! dont get so down on yourself dalring things will get better!
-
-
may all things get better for all of us amen,thnx 4 yr comment
-
Adding your comment:
